Friday 16 December 2011

Draft: first attempt of a narrative sequence/middle



Although I am happy with the structure of the different shots used in this sequence I think some of  is needs re-shooting, specifically the first shot of Rob as you can see my shadow over him from when I was recording. I also think the 3 shots of Beth and Rob when they're walking holding hands needs to be changed to cut to the beat. On the other hand, I also have some contrast issues with the last shot as well of Beth against the white background I will definitely be considering re-shooting those scenes.

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