To find out ways in which to improve my video and finding out my strengths and weaknesses when it comes to video making I made a questionnaire for ten people of different ages and genders to watch my music video I created and then answer the questions.
1. age/gender
14/Female
2. Do you understand the narrative of the story clearly? if so, what is your interpretation of it?
Yeah it's clearly that because it's a boy a girl it's a love story and because of the lyrics too
3. On a scale of 1 to 10 how would you rate the video over all?
8
4. Does the video show continuity according to you?
Yeah the different places go back and forth so it's like a story
5. what would you do to improve it?
The stories good as it is but put a bit more into it and not as much of the singing
1. age/gender
16/male
2. Do you understand the narrative of the story clearly? if so, what is your interpretation of it?
In some parts it's clear then other parts it isn't but yeah altogether I get what it's about especially because of the music too
3. On a scale of 1 to 10 how would you rate the video over all?
7
4. Does the video show continuity according to you?
Yes
5. what would you do to improve it?
Use more people so the story line is better and it's shown better
1. age/gender
18/ female
2. Do you understand the narrative of the story clearly? if so, what is your interpretation of it?
It's very clearly and easy to understand and the editing you have used helps with the storyline too which is really good like when you've made the boy fade out of the photo at the end
3. On a scale of 1 to 10 how would you rate the video over all?
8
4. Does the video show continuity according to you?
yeah a lot of it which is good because the main thing about it is narrative so it needs continuity
5. what would you do to improve it?
maybe not as many performance scenes
1. age/gender
17/female
2. Do you understand the narrative of the story clearly? if so, what is your interpretation of it?
there's a few bits I don't really get like the paper bit with the writing on then the tattoo but then once it was explained it was quite obvious about what it was
3. On a scale of 1 to 10 how would you rate the video over all?
7
4. Does the video show continuity according to you?
yeah there's loads of different locations always shown loads of times so it tells the story good
5. what would you do to improve it?
have less performance
1. age/gender
21/female
2. Do you understand the narrative of the story clearly? if so, what is your interpretation of it?
yes
3. On a scale of 1 to 10 how would you rate the video over all?
9
4. Does the video show continuity according to you?
yeah a lot of it
5. what would you do to improve it?
nothing it's really good how it is and interesting to watch
1. age/gender
19/male
2. Do you understand the narrative of the story clearly? if so, what is your interpretation of it?
A girl who is giving a boy up and it's more or less showing you the process of it and what's happened with them
3. On a scale of 1 to 10 how would you rate the video over all?
8
4. Does the video show continuity according to you?
yeah I like how it has scenes of the boy playing the guitar too and then it goes to her playing it
5. what would you do to improve it?
some bits of the narrative are a bit confusing to understand to maybe more elaboration on them to get it a bit more
1. age/gender
16/male
2. Do you understand the narrative of the story clearly? if so, what is your interpretation of it?
Yes it's clear to understand and know what's happening with the characters, you've done a good job of putting the narrative with the song lyrics.
3. On a scale of 1 to 10 how would you rate the video over all?
9
4. Does the video show continuity according to you?
Yes because of all the different locations and showing past scenes of the couple helps tell the story properly
5. what would you do to improve it?
do more scenes of the couple
1. age/gender
18/male
2. Do you understand the narrative of the story clearly? if so, what is your interpretation of it?
Everything is set out very well so the story is easy to understand and it's clear that the story is a girl giving a boy up and showing the process of it with aspects of performance too
3. On a scale of 1 to 10 how would you rate the video over all?
8
4. Does the video show continuity according to you?
Yes and a lot of it too, I think that's what makes the video really good and actually interesting to watch
5. what would you do to improve it?
There isn't really anything i would improve to the actual shots I think there's just enough narrative and performance to be interesting but I would maybe re-shoot a few things as a few shots are blurry
1. age/gender
19/female
2. Do you understand the narrative of the story clearly? if so, what is your interpretation of it?
some parts it's not easy to understand like the tattoo part, I didn't know what that was about. But the rest is easy to understand, the lyrics go with everything really well
3. On a scale of 1 to 10 how would you rate the video over all?
7
4. Does the video show continuity according to you?
yeah
5. what would you do to improve it?
add more scenes of the boy and girl together
1. age/gender
17/female
2. Do you understand the narrative of the story clearly? if so, what is your interpretation of it?
A girl and a boy who are together and in a relationship then break up and the video is obviously showing this transition
3. On a scale of 1 to 10 how would you rate the video over all?
8
4. Does the video show continuity according to you?
yeah throughout the whole thing
5. what would you do to improve it?
As the lyrics don't really say why the couple have broken up you could of maybe shown something in the narrative
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